Friday, April 28, 2006

Poem: Once I Was Free... (Incomplete)

I was going through My Documents folder and deleting all the old documents that clutter it. I came across a poem that I started to write over a year ago and never finished it. I made many attempts to finish it and failed because I can't recall the train of thought that made me write it in the first place. So, I think this poem will always remain unfinished. It is a very rough draft. So rough that whenever I read it, I just can't help think how awful it is. I have a problem letting go of things unfinished, so I decided to publish it rather than to delete it. This is my way of letting go of my past projects.

By Knightmare

Once I was free
In the land of despair
Because I could not see
Any of hope's flare

Once I was free
Innocent and gay
Like a squirrel in the tree
That swiftly flinched away

Once I was free
In the chains of ignorance


  1. What was that about the squirrel being Gay? :D

  2. i like ur poem. so far it is great!!!!!! Good luck with wirting the rest of it!!!!!!!!!!

  3. i like your poem so far! Good luck with wriring the rest of it.!!